Dear Li Hua, These days I always play computer games for a long time. As a result, it is difficult for me to finish my homework on time. Also I often feel sleepy when I have lessons. I know playing computer games is bad for my study and health, but I can’t stop doing it. I’m angry with myself. What should I do? Can you give me some advice? Please write to me soon. Yours, Jim
Dear Jim, Don’t be angry with yourself. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua
题型:写作题难度:中档来源:不详
答案
Dear Jim, Don’t be angry with yourself. I really feel worried about you. I don’t think it’s right to spend too much time playing computer games. It is bad for not only your study but also your health. As a student, schoolwork is the most important thing for you. So remember to finish your homework first after school. And it’s also a good idea to do some sports with your friends when you are free. That will help you forget computer games. What’s more, you’d better go to bed earlier to get enough sleep so that you can listen to the teacher carefully in class. I hope my advice can help you. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua
题目简介
根据中文和英文提示,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已经给出,其词数不计入所完成的回信内,请不要写出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李华,收到你-八年级英语
题目详情
假如你是李华,收到你的笔友Jim的来信,信中谈到他最近沉迷于电脑游戏中,他认为这不仅有损身心健康,而且还影响学习,为此,他很苦恼。请根据这封信的内容,给Jim写一封回信,谈谈你的看法及建议。
These days I always play computer games for a long time. As a result, it is difficult for me to finish my homework on time. Also I often feel sleepy when I have lessons. I know playing computer games is bad for my study and health, but I can’t stop doing it. I’m angry with myself. What should I do? Can you give me some advice? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Jim
Don’t be angry with yourself.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Don’t be angry with yourself. I really feel worried about you. I don’t think it’s right to spend too much time playing computer games. It is bad for not only your study but also your health.
As a student, schoolwork is the most important thing for you. So remember to finish your homework first after school. And it’s also a good idea to do some sports with your friends when you are free. That will help you forget computer games. What’s more, you’d better go to bed earlier to get enough sleep so that you can listen to the teacher carefully in class. I hope my advice can help you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
点评:注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题,时态一般是一般现在时态,人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明,说明有条理,符合逻辑。