My pen friend is Lisa.She is thirtheen years old..She’s from New York,the US.Now,she studies in No.3 Middle School.She is hard-working. All the teachers like her. I have a photo of her. She has long hairand she is tall and thin. I think she is very pretty.Of all the colors, she likes bule best. So do I . Besides,she likes resding,swimming,and playing chess. Now Lisa and I are good friends.
试题分析：这是一篇图表式作文。主要是人物介绍。提供的信息很详细：年龄，地址，爱好，学校。写作时注意动词的第三人称单数。主要时态是一般现在时。 【亮点说明】初级学生能合理发挥，适当增加细节很是不错。在文中还用到了新颖的句式更使文章富有逻辑性。如：Of all the colors，So do I，Besides。提醒学生在平时要多记多背一些短语和句子。
题目简介
请你以My pen friend 为题，写一篇短文，向同学介绍你的笔友。姓名Lisa年龄13籍贯美国纽约（New York）学校No. 3 Middle School外貌长头发， 又高又瘦， 爱好最喜
题目详情
1. 用词规范， 语法正确。
2. 句意通顺，要点齐全。
3. 可适当增加细节。
4. 不少于60词。
答案
My pen friend is Lisa.She is thirtheen years old..She’s from New York,the US.Now,she studies in No.3 Middle School.She is hard-working. All the teachers like her.
I have a photo of her. She has long hairand she is tall and thin. I think she is very pretty.Of all the colors, she likes bule best. So do I . Besides,she likes resding,swimming,and playing chess.
Now Lisa and I are good friends.
试题分析：这是一篇图表式作文。主要是人物介绍。提供的信息很详细：年龄，地址，爱好，学校。写作时注意动词的第三人称单数。主要时态是一般现在时。
【亮点说明】初级学生能合理发挥，适当增加细节很是不错。在文中还用到了新颖的句式更使文章富有逻辑性。如：Of all the colors，So do I，Besides。提醒学生在平时要多记多背一些短语和句子。