假如你是赵洋,你想要假如江苏观鸟协会。请根据申请表内容完成80词左右的申请信.NameZhao Yang Date of birth2000年10月20日Telephone number0518--8

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假如你是赵洋,你想要假如江苏观鸟协会。请根据申请表内容完成80词左右的申请信.NameZhao Yang Date of birth2000年10月20日Telephone number0518--8

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假如你是赵洋,你想要假如江苏观鸟协会。请根据申请表内容完成80词左右的申请信.
Name
Zhao Yang
Date of birth
2000年10月20日
Telephone number
0518--87260039
Email
[email protected]
School
Sunshine Middle school
Grade
8
Favourite subjects
生物、英语
Interests and hobbies
收集各种动物图片、听音乐
Activities to protect wildlife
去年春天和朋友一起去扎龙自然保护区参加了保护鸟类的活动。
reasons
喜爱大自然,对植物动物感兴趣, 想要更多的了解鸟,人们砍伐树,鸟越来越少,想做些事情来保护鸟
Free time
每周六下午2点到5点
注意:书写工整, 段落分明。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
                                                                                
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yang
题型:写作题难度:中档来源:不详

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Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
My name is Zhao Yang. I was born on 20th October, 2000. I’m in Grade 8 at Sunshine Middle school. My favourite subjects are biology and English. My interests and hobbies are collecting the pictures of all kinds of animals and listening to music. I love nature and I’m very interested in animals and plants. I also want to know more about birds. Because I learned that the number of birds is becoming smaller and smaller, so I want to do some things to protect them. Last Spring my classmates and I went to Zhalong reserve to take part in the activity of protecting animals.. And I’m free between two and five O’clock every Saturday afternoon.
I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club. You can call me on 0518--87260039 or e-mail me at [email protected].
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yang

试题分析:这是一篇应用文写作,写一封应聘信。由于给出的材料比较全面,我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。结合材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,第一人称,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
【亮点说明】这篇短文语言要准确、简明,说明有条理,准确地阐明了自己基本爱好和特长,并包含了文中所要求的全部信息,符合应聘信的格式和要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语,包含复合形容词的准确使用为文章增色不少.如the number of birds, I’m very interested in animals and plants,I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club.学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

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