请你根据下面表格中的提示,写一篇关于爱好的文章。In the pastNowReasonplay computer gamesplay basketball,listen to musicbe bad

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请你根据下面表格中的提示,写一篇关于爱好的文章。In the pastNowReasonplay computer gamesplay basketball,listen to musicbe bad

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请你根据下面表格中的提示,写一篇关于爱好的文章。
In the past
Now
Reason
play computer games
play basketball,
listen to music
be bad for eyes,
make new friends,
help…relax,…
    要求:1、文章要体现表格中的所有提示,可适当发挥。
2、词数不少于70词。
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题型:写作题难度:中档来源:不详

答案


One possible version:
I used to play computer games after class. But it was very bad for my eyes. Now I enjoy playing basketball. It is good for my health and I get much stronger. And I can make many new friends as well. I also enjoy listening to music. It helps me relax after class. Good hobbies can help people a lot. So I hope everyone can have good hobbies and live happily.

试题分析:本篇书面表达应抓住表格所提供的信息,过去、现在的兴趣爱好以及原因。写作中应注意文章的层次脉络以及时态。准确运用一般过去时和一般现在时。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,准确运用一般过去时和一般现在时。先介绍过去的兴趣爱好及缺点,再介绍现在的兴趣爱好及理由。最后,表明自己的看法,脉络清晰。本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如:used to , as well, be good for, also等。

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